In
this polished excerpt, Emma Kraus’ main character, Riley, and her family find
themselves being chased by creatures from the past. For their own safety, Riley
and her twin brother, Logan, have to understand the minds of their pre-historic
pursuers. The only way to stop the chase is to let the arrows fly.
When Arrows Fly
An
Excerpt by Emma Kraus
“Ready to go?” my dad
asked, as he checked his watch.
That watch had belonged
to my great uncle, the one we no longer talk to, nor talk about. He was the one who was making us leave our home. The fear of
thinking he is the only family we have left creates nightmares that even adults
can’t sleep through.
“Yeah,” I said. “I'm
ready.”
I climbed into the old
VW bus next to my brother as my dad locked the door to our house.
“You know,” my brother
said, “we will never walk into that house again.”
“We might if this ends
soon,” I said with hope.
“We won’t,” he said,
sharply looking me in the eyes.
We have the same blue
eyes, same brown hair, and the same face for that matter. I guess that’s what
happens when you share the same womb.
I turned and looked out
the window at the woods.
“Yeah,” I said. “I
know.”
“Hey,” my dad yelled
from the front. “Can one of you be in change of the GPS until your mother has a
free hand?” She was braiding her hair.
“I’ll take it,” I said.
“No, I’m older. I’ll
take it,” Logan said grabbing it from my dad.
I just smiled and
looked out the window. He always liked to play the “I’m The Older Twin Game.”
I put my ear buds in
and hit “Shuffle.” I ended up skipping a bunch of songs until I found the one I
was looking for. We pulled out of the driveway onto the small gravel road we
had been down countless times.
My song started to fade
as we turned onto Main Street. No one said a word. At least, I don’t think so.
I couldn’t hear much over the upbeat song that had started playing. As we
passed the fields of northern New York I saw the farmers bringing their cows in
for the night. I leaned my head on the rough headrest and closed my eyes.
I woke to something
sharp grazing my leg.
“Owwww. Oh, my God,” I
cried. I grabbed my leg as my blood started to make an exit.
“Dad!” Logan yelled.
“Pull over. An arrow got Riley!”
I winced in pain, and
looked over to see a flint head sticking into the side of the bus across from
me. My mother was now at my side. She rolled up my pants.
“You all right?” asked
my dad from the driver’s seat.
“I guess so,” I said in
a whimper.
“Are you sure?” my mom
asked while she wiped away the small streams that had trickled down my face.
I nodded and put a fake
smile on for her.
I have a high pain
tolerance, but this did make me accept the tissue my mother extended to me.
“Come on, Lisa,” said
my dad. “We need to get out of here. Logan can bandage Riley up.”
My mother climbed back
into the front, and we were moving again.
“Tell me if it’s too
tight, and I’ll rewrap it,” Logan said giving me some pain medicine.
I grabbed the canteen
next to me and washed it down. I hated taking pills. I almost gagged.
“Thanks,” I said after
swallowing.
Logan nodded and
buckled himself in.
“They’re definitely
here,” said my dad. “They’re definitely here.”
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I must have dozed off
for a while because the next time I looked out the window the clouds were deep
red. It looked like someone had shot the sky with an arrow, like they had done
to me. I moaned in pain and shifted my body to face Logan. He was asleep and so
was my mother. She was passed out on the pull out bed in the bus. Her hair
swirled around her pale face from the wind that came from the broken window. It
looked like seaweed flowing in the ocean as the waves crashed over and over.
“Hey, Kid,” a voice said,
from the front. “How’s the leg holding up?”
“Really sore,” I
replied to my father. “It’s starting to bruise around the bandage.”
“It will hurt for a
while, Riley,” he said.
“I can’t believe that
arrow got through the window,” he said turning onto a highway marked 29 West.
We passed a strip mall.
“They weren’t able to
break through the glass last week,” I said looking at all the hit marks on the
windows around me.
“So, what does that
mean?” he asked. I could tell by his tone he already knew the answer.
It was silent besides
the infrequent sounds of the motor.
“They’re evolving,” I
said in a whisper.
“Yes,” he said running
a hand through his hair. “Yes, they are.”
Every time we thought
we were in control of them something new happened. The more sense my father had
tried to talk into my uncle, the more out of control things got.
The feud started about
three years ago. My father had been researching an archeological dig for work.
He studies Neanderthals and Homo Sapiens. The scientific name is too long for me
to remember, so I just tell people that he studies really old dead people.
Logan always reminded me that they weren’t “people” but neither of us really
knew what they were.
My dad and uncle worked
on the digs together. Their arrangement was perfect. My dad liked to be outdoors
digging up the bones, whereas my uncle wanted to be working with the DNA in the
dirt free environment of the laboratory. He and my dad spent a lot of time
together.
Well, until that day my
dad came home three hours late for dinner. He walked in the house silently.
My mom looked up from washing
the dishes.
“Lisa,” my father said.
“A moment in the other room, please.”
She wiped her hands
dry.
“What’s wrong?” she
asked in a concerned tone.
He didn’t answer.
She followed him into
the living room and shut the door behind her. Logan stood up next to me and
closed his math book.
“Come on,” he said
pulling on my arm.
“Stop it, Logan. I have
homework to do,” I said, annoyed.
“Don’t you wanna know
what’s wrong with Dad?” he asked.
We made eye contact,
and I knew we were thinking the same thing. I jumped to my feet. We walked over
and stood with our ears pressed against the door.
The conversation went
like this:
“You know how Parker
was trying to figure out how to make the solution and DNA work together?” said
my dad.
“Yeah, I remember,” my
mom replied.
“Well, he did,” my
father said breathlessly. “There’s no way of stopping him. If I knew he was
taking it this far, I would have tried to talk him out of it. I thought he was just
doing an experiment.” My dad sounded helpless.
“He is modifying their
brains.”
“Why?” my mother asked.
“Because Neanderthals
have a more intellectual brain than humans do. They went extinct not because of
being less skilled than the Homo-Sapiens, but from other causes. It just
happened that the Homo-Sapiens evolved into humans and the Neanderthals died
out. If they were still alive today they would outsmart any human.” my father
spilled the words out.
Logan and I looked at
each other, wide eyed.
It was silent after
that.
That was the moment we
found out what our uncle was really doing in the laboratory. He was trying to
make a more intelligent human, trying to see what would have happened if the
Neanderthals had survived instead of the Homo-Sapiens. That’s why we were here
in the bus and not at home in our beds. It had gotten so far out of control
that the only thing standing in the way of his evil plan was our lives.
We turned off of an
exit and pulled into a abandoned gas station. The light from the moon shone on
the broken windows of the store. Trees overlooked us instead of buildings. My
dad cut the engine. We were still the only two awake in the bus.
“Can you make sure the
windows are bolted down?” my dad asked.
I checked the back
windows as he checked the front. They were all secure, except for the one the
arrow had gotten through earlier. I set one of our moving boxes on the ledge to
cover the hole.
“All set, dad.”
“Thanks,” he said as he
set the car alarm.
The bus had a special
sensor that would set off a beeping sound whenever something human sized or
larger entered a thirty-foot radius around us. This gave us enough time to
react to our unwanted visitors.
“Get some sleep, Riley.
You need to be rested for tomorrow,” he said.
“Okay, ‘night, Dad,” I
said and pulled a blanket over me. I closed my eyes.
I heard the squeak of
the driver’s seat as he put it down to sleep.
“Goodnight, Riley.”
In spite of the
possible threats around us, I fell asleep. The sounds of a nearby creek added
harmony to my dreams.
About
the Author
Sixteen-year-old Emma
Kraus is in her tenth year of publishing the monthly “The Dog paper. Each month
of the paper is represented by a different dog, and each issue contains fiction
or travel pieces that Emma writes herself.
Though still in high
school, Emma is taking some college courses and has definite plans to continue
her writing.
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